The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
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the amount of production Correct your spelling
illustrate
illustrates
bu
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by
million
tonnes
in six different countries over twenty years between 1988 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
the United States had the biggest
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highest
level
in all years, and Scotland had the lowest average at all.
To begin
with, in 1988, the United States had the biggest amount of tonnes
107, both of
Ireland and Poland had the same Change preposition
apply
level
10 million
tonnes
, and the lowest level
is
Scotland 3 Wrong verb form
was
tonnes
. Moreover
, in 1992, also
the United Sates
had the largest Correct your spelling
States
level
and it is clear that
grew up to 150 million
tonnes
, Poland and Scotland had approximalty
the same average Correct your spelling
approximately
around
2 Change preposition
of around
million
tonnes
.
Therefore
, in 2000, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
tonnes
in Ireland deopped
to 9.9, Correct your spelling
dropped
also
in Japand
grew up to 25 as it was 15 in 1988. Correct your spelling
Japan
Furthermore
, Canada had 20 million
tonnes
in 1988 after 4 years it fell to 19 then
it went up again to 29 million
tonnes
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