The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table
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illustrate
illustrates
the amount of production
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million
tonnes
in six different countries over twenty years between 1988 to 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the United States had the
biggest
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level
in all years, and Scotland had the lowest average at all.
To begin
with, in 1988, the United States had the biggest amount of
tonnes
107, both
of
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Ireland and Poland had the same
level
10
million
tonnes
, and the lowest
level
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Scotland 3
tonnes
.
Moreover
, in 1992,
also
the United
Sates
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had the largest
level
and
it is clear that
grew up to 150
million
tonnes
, Poland and Scotland had
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approximately
the same average
around
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2
million
tonnes
.
Therefore
, in 2000, the
amount
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of
tonnes
in Ireland
deopped
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dropped
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to 9.9,
also
in
Japand
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Japan
grew up to 25 as it was 15 in 1988.
Furthermore
, Canada had 20
million
tonnes
in 1988 after 4 years it fell to 19
then
it went up again to 29
million
tonnes
.
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  • trend
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  • sharp rise
  • decline
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  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
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