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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
illusrate
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illustrate
illustrates
 the amount of production
bu
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by
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million
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tonnes
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 in six different countries over twenty years between 1988 to 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the United States had the
biggest
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highest
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level
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 in all years, and Scotland had the lowest average at all.
To begin
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 with, in 1988, the United States had the biggest amount of
tonnes
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 107, both
of
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apply
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Ireland and Poland had the same
level
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 10
million
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tonnes
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, and the lowest
level
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is
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 Scotland 3
tonnes
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.
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, in 1992,
also
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 the United
Sates
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States
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 had the largest
level
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 and
it is clear that
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 grew up to 150
million
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tonnes
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, Poland and Scotland had
approximalty
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approximately
 the same average
around
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of around
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 2
million
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tonnes
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.
Therefore
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, in 2000, the
amount
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number
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 of
tonnes
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 in Ireland
deopped
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dropped
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 to 9.9,
also
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 in
Japand
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Japan
 grew up to 25 as it was 15 in 1988.
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, Canada had 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988 after 4 years it fell to 19
then
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 it went up again to 29
million
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tonnes
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, it is clear that".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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