Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both view and give ur opinion

Some

people

argue that having a third education is the best way to get employed,

while

other

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others

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believe that practical experiences and advancing soft abilities

is

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more vital. In my view, gaining

experiences

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experience

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would benefit more, because nowadays, everyone has

college

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a college

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diploma, the only feature that

differentiate

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differentiates

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more genius well-educated potential workers is

domenstrating

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demonstrating

skills. On the one hand, since

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20th century

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university diploma has become

quintessential

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parf

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part

of being

employee

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an employee

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particularly

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in specific areas like medicine and law.

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, doctors are significantly open-minded,

highly

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and highly

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trained or they devote their 15 years to education so that they can be better

doctor

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doctors

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and earn higher

wage

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wages

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, all thanks to Undergraduate and

Master

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Master's

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or

PHD

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PhD

education. They are supposed to

be learn

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learn

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and

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every bit of humans or flora and fauna, because all discoveries and remedies

of

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ailments are the results of doctor's high knowledge.

On the other hand

, today's policy requires

from

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apply

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human kinds to be intelligent, well skilled and informative, not being nerd. In Marketing and up-to-date Technology,

in

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apply

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the

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apply

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companies, traders and software engineers do not have to graduate from any institution

,

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but must have some needed practical skills

such

as customer communication to have more sales or the function of programs like Java,

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and C++

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. Personally, practice makes perfect,

therefore

now,

people

should concentrate on going courses, which teach abilities in order to perform more realistic skills to companies that they have

potential

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the potential

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of broadening company's economy and politics. In conclusion, it is necessary to graduate from

colleges

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college

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for some

people

,

whereas

others assume that experienced and skilled workers have more opportunities to have a job. In my opinion,

practiced

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practised

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employees are more prone to get awarded, cause in today's world, as all

people

having

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diplomas, HR only focuses on ability performance and

amount

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the amount

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of internships.