The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002
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The table illustrates the information about the
consumption
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of different goods in
Ireland
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, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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by 2002.
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, the
consumption
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rate was the highest in food, beverages and cigarettes in all five countries in 2002. Italian people had the largest percentage of consumer spending on clothing and shoes,
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Turkish people had the highest expenditure on
education
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and leisure.
Turkey
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had the highest spending percentage in snacks, beverages and tobacco
consumption
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nearly 32.14%,
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Ireland
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came to the second place with 28%. The
consumption
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percentage of food, drinks and cigarettes in Spain, Italy and Sweden was relatively the same with 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77% respectively. Italian
consumption
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was the highest in clothing and footwear nearly 9%,
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Sweden had the lowest
consumption
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with only 5.40%.
Ireland
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, Spain and
Turkey
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consumer expenditure in clothing nearly 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.64% respectively.
Turkey
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had the largest proportion of spending on
education
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and leisure in 2002, with 4.35%. Spanish people expenditure in
education
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and enjoyment was the slowest in 2002, with only 1.98 per cent.
Ireland
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, Italy and Sweden’s
consumption
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of
education
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and leisure was nearly the same with 2.21%, 3.20% and 3.22% respectively.
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