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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The Below Graph presents data on the exports of Australia to four different countries
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withing
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 the
period
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 of 1990 to 2012 Throughout the
period
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, exports to China showed a significant increase year over the other,
while
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 India was on the bottom of the list
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Initially
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 over the first 12 years from 1990 to 2003, Japan exhibited a notable decrease from 27% to 18 % . Following that the exports of India fluctuated with a slight decrease of 2% over
this
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. China started its way to the peak time with an increase from 2% to 10%. After that from the
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 of 2003
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 2012, Japan minimally declined, giving a chance for China to hit a peak with an increase in the percentage by 20%, which made it
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the top export list country.
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 the US and India reached a similar point with a percentage of around 8%,

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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