The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009.

The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009.
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chart illustrates information about
complaints
which
complaints
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the complaints
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department of a single airline
receive
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received
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over
six-month
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a six-month
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period in 2009.
That is
clear, making
complaints
in
person
is more popular than other ways.
Also
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this
way increased month by month. It is notable
the
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that the
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lest
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last
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complaints
recorded
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were recorded
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in
June
by email/fax.
Complaints
by telephone and in
person
rised
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rose
each time starting from
Janurary
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January
. In fact, reporting by
personaly
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personally
is less than
other method
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another method
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in
Janurary
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January
but it
is
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exceeded others in
June
. The rate of
complaints
is
aproximetly
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approximately
1900. On
other
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the other
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hand, email/fax
decresed
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decreased
. The
falling
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fall
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of amount
compliants
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complaints
started
fro
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from
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Janurary
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January
and
proceed
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proceeded
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to
June
.
This
amount is about 390 in
June
. But using
telephone
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the telephone
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is changeable across six months. Its peak is 1600 and occurred in
June
same as
in
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in-person
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person
way. But its deep level is
diffirence
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different
from in
person
that happened
on
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in
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feburary
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february
.
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