The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.
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chart provides information about
changing
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rate of coffee which three countries exported from 2002 to 2012. It is obvious that the biggest changes occurred
export
of
Colombia
.
Thus
, the least
export
happened in 2008 by
Colombia
.
As well as
Brazil
is the leader in the selling of coffee between these countries. It is notable which exports of every country raised starting in 2008.
This
increasing process was continued in
Colombia
high level. In 2012,
export
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exports
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of
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Colombia
were 15
billion
kilograms
,
although
this
rate was 5
billion
kilograms
in 2002.
Export
raised about 20
billion
kilograms
in 10 years. Selling in
Brazil
developed
across
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these
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the
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years.
However
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However,
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there was some fall in
this
rate,
for instance
in 2010
this
level decreased.
Brazil
reached 25
billion
kilograms
in 2012.
Difference
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The difference
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is 5
billion
kilograms
between Costa Rica and
Brazil
. In fact, Costa Rica faced a serious fall
as
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Brazil
and
Colombia
, but
this
happened in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, colombia, brazil, billion, kilograms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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