The line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.

The line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.
The line chart illustrates
people
number in various distinct
age
groups
who enjoy going to
cinema
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a month in once
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Europe from more than once 2000 to 2011.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
age
groups
between 15-24 years had the highest
proportation
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proportion
during the given period.
However
,
people
around 35 and over
age
were seen as the lowest amount in all time period. Observing the chart in more detail, the number of
people
between 15-24
age
climbed
remarkablly
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remarkably
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from about 18% to around 51%. Another point to be noticed is that there was a significant sort in
age
groups
of 7-14 years accounting for nearly 10% and roughly 30% respectively.
In contrast
, there was a slight increase in the figure for 35-
age
groups
over 11%. One striking
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piece of information to be considered is that both
people
25-35 and 7-14
age
had an equal amount of approximately 30%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cinema attendance
  • age groups
  • line graph
  • trend
  • frequency
  • once a month
  • comparative analysis
  • peak attendance
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • increase
  • youth demographic
  • elderly viewers
  • decade
  • millennium
  • recreational habits
  • entertainment industry
  • consumer behavior
  • box office
  • crowd-favorite
  • blockbuster releases
  • market dynamics
  • digital revolution
  • streaming services
  • cultural shifts
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