‏the line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.

The line chart illustrates
people
number in various distinct
age
groups
who enjoy going to the cinema a month in
once
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Europe from more than once
2000
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in 2000
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to 2011.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
age
groups
between 15-24 years had the highest
proportation
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proportion
during the given period.
However
,
people
around 35 and over
age
were seen as the lowest amount in all time period. Observing the chart in more detail, the number of
people
between 15-24
age
climbed remarkably from about 18% to around 51%. Another point to be noticed is that there was a significant sort in
age
groups
of 7-14 years accounting for nearly 10% and roughly 30% respectively.
In contrast
, there was a slight increase in the figure for 35-
age
groups
over 11%. One striking piece of information to be considered is that both
people
25-35 and 7-14
age
had an equal amount of approximately 30%.
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