The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008

The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008
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The pie charts provide information on the distribution of the job occupations held by adults aged 23-65 in
Ashby
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across Greater Britain, in 2008.
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, the charts suggest that
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Ashby
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’s occupational structure is generally similar to the national picture for that year, it had a stronger presence in personal service roles and a slightly higher unemployment rate than the UK average.
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, the proportion of individuals occupied in professional
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sectors
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technical jobs was observed as much lower than the national average almost amounting to half. In
Ashby
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, the largest percentage of the working-age population is employed in personal service, accounting for 21%, which is relatively more than the national figure of 17%. Interestingly, unemployment comprises
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18%, nearly 1/5th of the entire population in the town and the figure is even higher rate at 19%
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the country's statistical analysis.
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suggests the difficulty in securing jobs in the country as a whole. Construction occupies the second-largest occupation category in
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at 16%, notably higher than the national figure of 10%, suggesting a greater local demand for manual labour. Office
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and technical
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are
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significant sectors in
Ashby
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, comprising 14% and 13%, respectively, which closely match national percentages (14% for office
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and 13% for technical
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).
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consistency indicates that
Ashby
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’s job market in these areas reflects broader UK trends.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Occupation
  • Distribution
  • Economy
  • Local vs National
  • Major employer
  • Educational institution
  • Balanced distribution
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Implications
  • Economic development
  • Social services
  • Educational planning
  • Employment landscape
  • Geographic location
  • Urban dynamics
  • Rural dynamics
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