You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price. You should write at least 150 words.

The provided charts demonstrate data for
sales
for Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in two periods 1999 and 2004 in five distinct European nations.
Overall
, the
sales
of coffee in 2004 were the highest in the UK.
However
, in Switzerland, banana
sales
were dominating above other countries.
To begin
with, In the UK, the
sales
of coffee were 1.5
million
euros
.
This
number skyrocketed to 20
million
euros
. Switzerland's
sales
doubled from 3
million
to 6
million
euros
. Denmark and Sweden have undergone a noticeable increase by one-fifth
million
and became 2
million
and 1
million
respectively.
Finally
, Belgium increased slightly from 1 in 1999 to 1.7 in 2004.
In addition
to
this
, Switzerland's
sales
of bananas increased sharply from 15 to 47
million
euros
. There was a growth in banana
sales
by five times in the UK from 1
million
to 5.5
million
euros
.
Moreover
, banana
sales
in Belgium demonstrated a substantial jump to 4
million
euros
. Ultimately, Sweden and Denmark's
sales
are approximately halved and become the same.
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