There is a problem with the road outside of your house. Write a letter to your local councillor. In your letter -Introduce yourself -Explain what the problem is -Tell the councillor what you would like to be done.
Dear Councillor,
I am a resident of the
ward
, for which you are eleceted
, road no.7, Correct your spelling
elected
that is
Parkview ward
. The context of writing this
letter is to highlight the problem I am facing. Actually
I bought my house a month ago and noticed something Add a comma
Actually,
that is
not just bothering me but also
causing problems to so many other people
.
Having said that, I am not aware if the previous house owner has already wrote
to you or not regarding Change the verb form
written
this
situation. There is a pothole right in front of house
but outside of my property, which is quite big Add an article
the house
such
that plethora
of water Correct article usage
a plethora
get
collected when Change the verb form
gets
its
raining. Replace the word
it's
it is
Moreover
, school children, elderly
and all other Correct article usage
the elderly
people
using this
way to their respective destination
Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
faces
difficulties. Plus, Correct subject-verb agreement
face
motorist
often Fix the agreement mistake
motorists
losses
balance resulting Replace the word
lose
into
3 accidents in Change preposition
in
span
of 4 weeks.
Add an article
the span
a span
Therefore
, I request Correct article usage
the councillor
councillor
and authorities to take Fix the agreement mistake
councillors
required
steps to fill the Correct article usage
the required
pothole
on Fix the agreement mistake
potholes
road
Correct article usage
the road
otherwise
reconstruct Correct word choice
and otherwise
roads
so that Correct article usage
the roads
people
can have safer road
. Not just I, Fix the agreement mistake
roads
whole
Add an article
the whole
ward
has a lot of hopes that people
Change noun form
people's
voice
Fix the agreement mistake
voices
would
be heard and Wrong verb form
will
ward
will get needed help. Correct article usage
the ward
Lastly
, I would be looking forward for
the steps taken for work to be done.
Regards
SimranChange preposition
to
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Coherence
To improve coherence, focus on making the flow of paragraphs more seamless to enhance readability.
Task Achievement
Adding more specific details about the road problem can clarify the extent of the issue and what exactly needs to be done.
Coherence
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, establishing a respectful tone.
Task Achievement
You have explained the problem with enough details for the councillor to understand the situation.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, appropriate for addressing a councillor.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite