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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides key information about the ages of the population of
Yemen
 and Italy. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
Yemen
 and Italy show an increase in 60+
years
 of gatogry.
In addition
, in
Yemen
 from 15 to 59
years
 number will increase
whereas
 in Italy it will decrease.
According to
 what is shown in 2000
Yemen
's population from 0 to 14
years
 was half of the total and in Italy was less than fifth, in
Yemen
 from 15 to 59
years
 it was 46.3 per cent and in Italy, it was the biggest rate which is 61.6% and for 60+
years
 it was the smallest rate in
Yemen
 3.6% and quarter on Italy. In terms of, 2050 in
Yemen
 from 15 to 59
years
 a significant increase from 46.3 to 57.3% will be more than half of the rate, and it will decrease by 60+
years
 from 50 to 36%. In Italy,
their
Replace the word
there
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 will be a big dropped in 15 to 59 and 60+
years
. And it will be doubled in 0 to 14
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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