You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides key information about the movement of people from rural to urban areas in
Iran
, Indonesia and
Russia
. The units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
Iran
has the highest rate.
In addition
, in 2000,
Iran
had the lowest rate
whereas
Russia
had the highest, and Indonesia
has
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stayed between them.
According to
what is shown in 2005,
Iran
's number of people are movement had significantly increased and
Russia
's rate
also
increased. Indonesia showed a slightly increased from 2005 to , 2020
then
remained at 30 million in 2025. In terms of from 2000 to 2020
Russia
had the highest number and
Iran
was under
Russia
but in 2020 they became equivalent and started
Iran
to move to
Russia
which increased slightly.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words iran, russia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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