You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#minutes #movement #people #areas #three #countries #predictions #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The line chart provides key information about the movement of people from rural to urban areas in
Iran
, Indonesia and Russia
. The units are measured in millions. Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Iran
has the highest rate. In addition
, in 2000, Iran
had the lowest rate whereas
Russia
had the highest, and Indonesia has
stayed between them. Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
what is shown in 2005, Iran
's number of people are movement had significantly increased and Russia
's rate also
increased. Indonesia showed a slightly increased from 2005 to , 2020 then
remained at 30 million in 2025. In terms of from 2000 to 2020 Russia
had the highest number and Iran
was under Russia
but in 2020 they became equivalent and started Iran
to move to Russia
which increased slightly.Submitted by mona11omar33 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words iran, russia with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
▼