The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

The provided diagram demonstrates the proportion of the total
production
globally by Asia, Europe, and other regions in the
world
for more than a century and a
half
from 1840 to 2000.
Overall
, there is an oscillation pattern among all countries without any domination for any area over the period. In the 19th century,
Asian
countries were on the top of the shelf with just over
half
of the total
production
,
while
European countries were two-fifths of the total
production
, and the
rest
belonged to the
rest
of the
world
. After 40 years,
Asian
nation's proportion halved to roughly one-quarter. In Europe, the
production
slightly increased to just under
half
. The
rest
of the
world
experienced a sharp increase and tripled to one-third. In the next century, European nations and the
rest
of the
world
witnessed improvements and increased by just under
half
and nearly one-third respectively. In the same period,
Asian
nation's
production
dipped to 20%. From 1920 to 2000, the
Asian
continent showed an upward trend,
while
in Europe,
production
decreased dramatically to nearly 30%.
Finally
, the
rest
of the
world
showed up and down trends and remained constant at 33 per cent.
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