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The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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This
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 chart illustrates the
percent
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per cent
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 of households
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owned
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owning
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owned
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 in the Country of
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the UK
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UK
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the UK
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 for people
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between
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with
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between
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the
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apply
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age
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ages
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apply
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of
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apply
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25-
34
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and 34
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 for the 10
years
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from
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since
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from
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 2004 until 2014. There are two types of households
owning
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apply
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in
UK
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the UK
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which
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apply
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having a
home
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by
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on
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 their own and renting a
home
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. Over the past 10
years
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showing
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shown
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 that the Renters increased throughout the
years
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 than the
Home
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 Owners. The
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home owners
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homeowners
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reach
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reached
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the
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a
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 peak of number in 2004 and dramatically fell for the next ten
years
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,
while
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 the
renters
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number of renters
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 sharply rocketed and
reach
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reached
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the
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a
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 peak in 2014. Based on the trend
showed
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shown
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from
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in
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 the chart we know that people nowadays prefer to rent a
home
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 rather than own a
home
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, home with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homeownership
  • renting
  • mortgage
  • down payment
  • property market
  • housing affordability
  • economic downturn
  • government incentives
  • interest rates
  • demographic shift
  • real estate
  • first-time buyers
  • market trends
  • property prices
  • financial stability
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