The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.
This
chart illustrates the percent
of households Change the spelling
per cent
Wrong verb form
owned
owning
in the Country of Wrong verb form
owned
Correct article usage
the UK
UK
for people Correct article usage
the UK
Change preposition
between
with
Change preposition
between
the
Correct article usage
apply
age
Fix the agreement mistake
ages
Change preposition
apply
of
25-Change preposition
apply
34
for the 10 Correct word choice
and 34
years
Change preposition
from
since
2004 until 2014.
There are two types of households Change preposition
from
owning
in Verb problem
apply
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
which
having a Correct pronoun usage
apply
home
by
their own and renting a Change preposition
on
home
. Over the past 10 years
showing
that the Renters increased throughout the Wrong verb form
shown
years
than the Home
Owners. The home owners
Correct your spelling
homeowners
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak of number in 2004 and dramatically fell for the next ten Correct article usage
a
years
, while
the renters
sharply rocketed and Correct quantifier usage
number of renters
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak in 2014.
Based on the trend Correct article usage
a
showed
Wrong verb form
shown
from
the chart we know that people nowadays prefer to rent a Change preposition
in
home
rather than own a home
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