The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.
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bar chart compares data about the fraction of the total goods that were produced in the world by Asia,
Europe
and others between 1840 and 2000.
Overall
, it was important that the trend of Asia and
Europe
reduced over the period of 60 years.
According to
the graph, at the start, Asia, the main continent that manufactured most products in the world, hit just over 50%;
then
its portion declined significantly and reached the nadir at one-fifth in 1920;
however
, it climbed moderately to just under 40% in 2000. The diagram demonstrates that
Europe
, the second region, touched 40% in 1840;
thereafter
, it rose slightly and peaked at roughly 48% in 1920;
nevertheless
, it fell to nearly 28% in 2000. In the beginning, the rest of the world recorded approximately 10% after that, it jumped considerably to the highest mark, which was nearly the same as
Europe
,at almost 36% in 1960;
then
its proportion of about 5% went down in 2000.
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