The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the changes that happened in the Town of Westley between 1815 and 2024.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are more transportation options in the city right now. Although
the green area has decreased, there are more places where a person can spend their free time.
In 1815 the church was in the centre of the city. Behind it
there was a forest. Down the Add a comma
it,
road
from this
building, there was a Town hall and Market square surrounded by Houses. This
road
leads us to the fields placed there. Lord Westley's House stayed near the road
leading to the Tinton Village. There also
was a road
leading to London.
Fields were demolished and replaced by a cinema and main Railway Station. Lenton Woods were
cut out. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
New
Housing estate was built there. Correct article usage
A New
Road
leading to London was replaced by railways. And Lord Westley's House was replaced by The Add an article
The road
red lion
and Lenton HotelCorrect your spelling
Red Lion
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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