The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams illustrate the changes that happened in the Town of Westley between 1815 and 2024.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are more transportation options in the city right now.
Although
the green area has decreased, there are more places where a person can spend their free time. In 1815 the church was in the centre of the city. Behind
it
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there was a forest. Down the
road
from
this
building, there was a Town hall and Market square surrounded by Houses.
This
road
leads us to the fields placed there. Lord Westley's House stayed near the
road
leading to the Tinton Village. There
also
was a
road
leading to London. Fields were demolished and replaced by a cinema and main Railway Station. Lenton Woods
were
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cut out.
New
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Housing estate was built there.
Road
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The road
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leading to London was replaced by railways. And Lord Westley's House was replaced by The
red lion
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and Lenton Hotel
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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