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The table below shows the GDP, annual economic growth, and GDP per capita of the five largest economies in the world in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the GDP, annual economic growth, and GDP per capita of the five largest economies in the world in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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This
 table compares three economic
indicaters
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indicators
:
GDP
, annual
growth
, and
GDP
 per
capita
 in the five largest economic
countries's
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countries
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 in 2019
According to
 the data, these countries can be
devided
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divided
 into three classes in terms of
GDP
: high (America and China), middle (Japan,
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Germany
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),
low
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and low
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 (India),
whereas
 the trends of
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the remainng
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remainng
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remaining
 two
indicaters
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indicators
indicates
varies
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.
US
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The US
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 had by far the largest
GDP
, with $21.4 trillion.
In addition
,
although
GDP
 per person was the top among the five
countires
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countries
counties
, its annual
growth
 is the
third,
following China and India. It is interesting to note that China has the highest percentage of
its
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annual
growth
, 6.1% ,
whereas
GDP
 per
capita
 was the
least
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last
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 second. Japan and Germany recorded
the
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similar data in each section.
However
, Germany has
slightly
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a slightly
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 higher
GDP
 per
capita
 compared to Japan. India had the fifth largest
GDP
 in the world and the second in its annual
growth
,
whereas
 the
GDP
 per
capita
 was the lowest in the table, only $2100.
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