The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The given map illustrates the current layout of the Norbition industrial area and its proposed future developments.
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, the outline involves converting industrial sites into residential housing and adding essential facilities to enhance the quality of life for residents. Currently, the sites feature a central roundabout surrounded by several facilities, with farmland located to the north and a river flowing alongside. In the proposed plan, all factories will be replaced with residential housing and shops, creating a more livable environment. Two new roads will branch off from the roundabout
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a smaller roundabout will be constructed under the original to enhance traffic flow. A medical
center
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will be opened southwest of the roundabout, improving healthcare access for residents.
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, they will add a school and a playground to the east. A bridge will be built over the river to improve connectivity,
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the farmland will be reduced in size. A In conclusion, the redevelopment of the Norbiton industrial area aims to create a balanced community by integrating residential spaces and essential facilities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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