The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

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information about the major motives for study among students of different age groups and how much support they received from employers.

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, as it is illustrated, choosing study for career goals was made by a young part of society,

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the older part of

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society decided to study for their own interests.

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, the youngest and the oldest employees heeded the support most.

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,the

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of people under 26 , 26-29 and 30-39 who studied for career purposes showed the largest figures

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as 80%, 70% and approximately 60%, respectively.

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, with the same goals the

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of students at the middle ages and over 49, demonstrated the smallest percentages for about 40% and 20%. Considering studying for interest , the trend was

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of old parts of society(40-49 and over 49) gaining knowledge for interest was the largest, reaching 70%.

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, around 60% of individuals under 26

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old asked for support, and help with fees, which was the largest figure than others.

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of employees 26-29

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old and over 49

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showed the second largest figure at about 50%. The smallest index of asking

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from other

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was illustrated by 30-49

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old workers.