A friend wants to get some information about an elementary school where one of your cousins studies. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, •say why this school is a good elementary school •mention how expensive it is • explain why your friend should get his/her child admitted there
Dear shan,
I am well, I hope you and your family will be
find
. I am writing Correct your spelling
fine
this
letter about
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because
you'r
asked Correct your spelling
you
some
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for some
informations
about our Change the wording
information
pieces of information
cousins
studies Change noun form
cousin's
elementary
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in elementary
school
. It is a big school
in our area. this
school
has many facilities Correct quantifier usage
such those
those
are well academic Correct pronoun usage
that
curriculam
and Correct your spelling
curriculum
co-curriculam
, Correct your spelling
co-curriculum
co-curricular
play ground
, Correct your spelling
playground
class rooms
, and all of them. All Correct your spelling
classrooms
teacher's
were qualified. they are teaching academic and Change the noun form
teachers
teacher
non academic
subjects perfectly. Add a hyphen
non-academic
child are
go to Wrong verb form
Children
school
with happines
.
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happiness
Moreover
, IYou
have to know about the expensive. If you like to Correct your spelling
you
admidd
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admit
in
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to
this
school
one person you have to pay admission
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an admission
fee
$
2000 pounds, Change preposition
of $
facilities
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the facilities
fee
is $500 pounds and exam
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the exam
fee
$
500 without Add a missing verb
is $
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the badmission
badmission
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admission
bad mission
fee
you have to pay each months
.
Change to a singular noun
month
Lastly
, I pefer
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prefer
this
school
to your child
. they are very
talented Add an article
a very
the very
child
. If you allow to
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them to
this
school
they can improve there
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their
educational
and all skills Replace the word
education
quikly
. All teachers will be help with them. so you have to Correct your spelling
quickly
take
good Correct your spelling
make
dissions
for your Correct your spelling
decisions
missions
child
.
best whises
AammCorrect your spelling
wishes
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structure
Improve the structure by organizing your ideas into more distinct paragraphs.
grammar
Pay attention to spelling and grammatical accuracy to improve clarity in your writing.
vocabulary
Try to use more varied vocabulary to make the letter more engaging and clear.
task response
The letter manages to address all parts of the task: explaining why the school is good, mentioning its expenses, and giving reasons to admit a child there.
tone
The friendly tone of the letter is appropriate for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,