The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line chart compares data about how many people per thousand visited 3 various museums in London from June to September of 2013.
Overall
, it was important that the trend of all places other than the Natural History
Museum
rose over the period of 3 months.
According to
the diagram, the British
Museum
, the most popular place among these museums at all time, fashion fluctuated between 800 and 500 owing to the fact that at the start, it hit 600;
then
it increased and reached the vertex of 750 in July;
however
, it reduced to lowest mark at 500 in August;
finally
, it touched roughly 650 in September. The graph demonstrates that the Natural History
Museum
, the second one, recorded 550 in June;
thereafter
, it declined moderately to just under 400 after that its number stabilized until August;
then
it climbed slightly to approximately 450. The
last
one was the Science
Museum
;
additionally
, in the beginning, it reported 400;
then
it dipped to a minimum point of 300 in August;
nevertheless
, it grew marginally to the number that was nearly the same as the Natural History
Museum
in September.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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