The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given flow chart depicts the
procces
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process
of using water to produce
electricity
.
On
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this
diagram
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it is seen roughly 10 steps, that are going
sequently
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sequentially
. The process begins with the evaporation of seawater,
then
it becomes
into
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a rain cloud and it fills an already prepared reservoir with
dam
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a dam
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and valve. Here, the main process of generating
electricity
starts.
Firstly
, after opening the valve, the strong flow
is going
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to the turbine, which generates
electricity
and
redirect
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it to the high voltage cables and to the pump. After that,
produced
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the produced
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electricity
goes to the transformer station.
Furthermore
,
transformer
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the transformer
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station changes the direction of
electricity
to the different facilities via underground cables.
Such
as
,
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schools, hospitals, factories and private houses.
As a result
, nowadays we have great environmental problems.
Thus
, many scientists try to invent new productive sources of
electricity
. So, provided process of producing
electricity
is eco-friendly.
That is
why, it is a great way to use water to produce
electricity
.
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