The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates the source of income which was allocated for
police
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the police
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budget in
on
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one
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of the towns in Britain,
while
the pies focus on
expenditure
Add an article
the expenditure
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of
this
money
in 2017 and 2018.
Firstly
, the biggest amount was made by
National
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the National
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Government with 175 and about 178 million pounds in 2017 and 2018 respectively, meaning that
this
factor remained the main source over the period. Local Taxes,
also
, played a big role here and made 91.2 million in the first year and had a 10% increase in 2018.
On the other hand
, other sources like grants, only accounted for less than 20% of the total budget. As for the way the
money
got spent, we can see in 2017 three quarters of
total
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the total
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budget was spent on
salaries
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the salaries
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of officers and staff. Technology used 8% of
this
money
,
however
in 2018
this
value almost doubled and reached 14% at the
expence
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expense
of salaries becoming lower by 6 per cent.
To sum up
, there was around 310
millions
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million
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allocated for police expenses in the period.
Altough
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Although
, the way the
money
was used varied throughout the time, but
buldings
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buildings
building
and transport expenses remained constant.
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