The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates cellular phone utility per various kinds of mobile device qualities in three years: 2006, 2008, 2010.
Overall
, mobile phones have many advantageous features. Features in mobile phone utilities include making calls, taking
photos
, sending and receiving text messages, playing
games
, searching the
internet
, playing
music
and recording
videos
. Mostly, people made calls in 2006 and 2008. Taking
photos
was most popular in 2010. Sending and receiving text messages was highest in 2010. Playing
games
was most predominant in 2008.
Internet
searches increased in 2010. Playing
music
argely
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largely
popular in 2010. Recording
videos
was mainly in 2010. Generally, the advantages of mobile phones increased except for making calls. Making calls in two years, 2006 and 2008, was stable, but in 2010, making calls decreased, even though only by one
percent
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. Making calls
stable
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at 100% and decreased by 1% in 2010. All in all, taking
photos
increased from 2006 until 2010. Taking
photos
in 2006
is
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66% and increased to 71% in 2008 and 76% in 2010. Sending and receiving text messages rose each year and was mostly used in 2010 with 76%. Playing
games
increased from 17% in 2006 to 42% in 2008. Playing
games
reduced by 1% in 2010 from 2008, becoming 41%. Searching the
internet
and recording
videos
had no data in 2006 but in 2008 both increased in 2010. Searching the
internet
was at 26% in 2010 and recording
videos
was at 35% in 2010. Playing
music
increased each year. Playing
music
in 2006 and mostly in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words photos, games, internet, music, videos with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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