The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates cellular phone utility per various kinds of mobile device qualities in three years: 2006, 2008, 2010.

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, mobile phones have many advantageous features. Features in mobile phone utilities include making calls, taking

photos

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, sending and receiving text messages, playing

games

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, searching the

internet

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, playing

music

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and recording

videos

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. Mostly, people made calls in 2006 and 2008. Taking

photos

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was most popular in 2010. Sending and receiving text messages was highest in 2010. Playing

games

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was most predominant in 2008.

Internet

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searches increased in 2010. Playing

music

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argely

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largely

popular in 2010. Recording

videos

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was mainly in 2010. Generally, the advantages of mobile phones increased except for making calls. Making calls in two years, 2006 and 2008, was stable, but in 2010, making calls decreased, even though only by one

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. Making calls

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at 100% and decreased by 1% in 2010. All in all, taking

photos

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increased from 2006 until 2010. Taking

photos

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in 2006

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66% and increased to 71% in 2008 and 76% in 2010. Sending and receiving text messages rose each year and was mostly used in 2010 with 76%. Playing

games

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increased from 17% in 2006 to 42% in 2008. Playing

games

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reduced by 1% in 2010 from 2008, becoming 41%. Searching the

internet

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and recording

videos

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had no data in 2006 but in 2008 both increased in 2010. Searching the

internet

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was at 26% in 2010 and recording

videos

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was at 35% in 2010. Playing

music

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increased each year. Playing

music

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in 2006 and mostly in 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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254 words

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