Task1: The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian province between 2001 and 2006.
The chart illustrates the percentage change in the share of international
students
among university graduates
across different Canadian provinces
from 2001 to 2006. Overall
, there was a notable increase in the number of international graduates
in every province, although
the extent of this
increase varied.
In 2001, New Brunswick
had the highest proportion of international students
, accounting for approximately 20% of its university graduates
. This
was significantly higher than other provinces
, which indicates that New Brunswick
was particularly attractive to overseas students
at that time. By 2006, the percentage of international graduates
in New Brunswick
rose further
, reflecting its continued appeal.
Conversely
, provinces
like Alberta and British Columbia also
experienced substantial increases in their shares of international graduates
. Alberta, starting from a lower base of around 8% in 2001, saw an impressive rise to nearly 15% by 2006. This
growth suggests that Alberta became increasingly popular among international students
during this
period.
Ontario and Quebec, while
having lower initial percentages in 2001, also
demonstrated growth. Ontario saw its share rise from about 12% to 18%, while
Quebec experienced a modest increase from 10% to around 14%. These changes highlight a broader trend of increasing globalization in higher education across Canada.
In summary, the chart indicates a consistent upward trajectory in the share of international students
among university graduates
in all provinces
from 2001 to 2006, with New Brunswick
leading the way in terms of percentage. This
trend underscores Canada's growing reputation as a destination for higher education among international students
.Submitted by fanyi0511 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, graduates, provinces, brunswick with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼