The maps show the layout of Lakeview Apartments in the present and development plans for the year 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps illustrate the present plan of Lakeview Apartments,
as well as
the development plan for the year 2030. Overall
, the two
provided maps have similiar
planning, but with a few additional Correct your spelling
similar
buildings
built.
The first difference that the map presents is the courtyard's construction in the middle of four blocks
, located in the middle of the Lakeview Apartments. The second one is the demolishment
of the Community Replace the word
demolition
center
. It's been replaced by the exit. Change the spelling
centre
In addition
, a Supermarket was built between the entrance and exit. Also
, two
more additional blocks
are planned: Kids'
Game Correct article usage
the Kids'
centre
and Capitalize word
Centre
Family
Gym. Correct article usage
the Family
Thus
, to build these two
buildings
, a part of the park has been demolished to construct these two
buildings
.
As the main similarity, it's the same location of four main blocks
. Another crucial is keep
the benches near the lake. Fix the infinitive
to keep
Also
, keeping
the planted trees near the four main Wrong verb form
keep
blocks
.
In conclusion, the main buildings
of this
area are planned to be kept in place. But, there are a few new buildings
have
been added.Correct pronoun usage
that have
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