The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps illustrate the current state of Huntingdon and its projected future change.
Overall
, it can be seen that radical changes have taken place in the
town
by enhancing transportation infrastructure and establishing a new industrial area. The first
map
depicts the
town
’s structure presently. There has been the A1
road
that runs down from north to south. In the northwest corner of the
map
, an intersection between the A1 and A14 roads,
forming
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a roundabout. To the right of the A1
road
heading south, there is a branch leading to the airfield.
Additionally
, a ring
road
surrounds the
town
center
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centre
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and links directly to the A1
road
, and
this
connected
road
is called
Bramption
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Brampton
road
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Road
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.
Finally
, a railway station in the
center
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of the
map
withs
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with
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its rail line encircling the resident area. The second
map
shows the
town
’s future improvement. Excepting the structure of the railway station and the residential zone will remain complete, there will be huge changes introduced in the park. To be more specific, the airfield will be turned into an industrial estate.
Furthermore
,
the
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Bramption
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Brampton
road
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Road
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will no longer be linked to the A1
road
,
instead
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instead,
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a new roundabout will be added to intersect all three A1, Bramption
road
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Road
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and
town
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the town
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centre.
Besides
it
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this
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, the
town
’s figure will be transformed from
rectangle
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a rectangle
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to
semicircle
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a semicircle
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.
Finally
, the A14
road
will be separated into two branches, one will connect to the
town
centre,
the
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and the
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other one will link to the A1
road
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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