The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps illustrate the current state of Huntingdon and its projected future change.
Overall
, it can be seen that radical changes have taken place in the town
by enhancing transportation infrastructure and establishing a new industrial area.
The first map
depicts the town
’s structure presently. There has been the A1 road
that runs down from north to south. In the northwest corner of the map
, an intersection between the A1 and A14 roads, forming
a roundabout. To the right of the A1 Wrong verb form
forms
road
heading south, there is a branch leading to the airfield. Additionally
, a ring road
surrounds the town
center
and links directly to the A1 Change the spelling
centre
road
, and this
connected road
is called Bramption
Correct your spelling
Brampton
road
. Capitalize word
Road
Finally
, a railway station in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
map
withs
its rail line encircling the resident area.
The second Correct your spelling
with
map
shows the town
’s future improvement. Excepting the structure of the railway station and the residential zone will remain complete, there will be huge changes introduced in the park. To be more specific, the airfield will be turned into an industrial estate. Furthermore
, the
Correct article usage
apply
Bramption
Correct your spelling
Brampton
road
will no longer be linked to the A1 Capitalize word
Road
road
, instead
a new roundabout will be added to intersect all three A1, Bramption Add a comma
instead,
road
and Capitalize word
Road
town
centre. Correct article usage
the town
Besides
it
, the Correct pronoun usage
this
town
’s figure will be transformed from rectangle
to Correct article usage
a rectangle
semicircle
. Correct article usage
a semicircle
Finally
, the A14 road
will be separated into two branches, one will connect to the town
centre, the
other one will link to the A1 Correct word choice
and the
road
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, map, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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