You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter •explain why you think you would be suitable for the job •say what else you could do for the family •give your reasons for wanting the job
#advertisement #couple #australia #someone #two #children #language #year #•explain #job #•say #•give
Dear
sir
/madam,
I am writing in the context of Capitalize word
Sir
advertisement
I saw, from you. I believeCorrect article usage
an advertisement
,
I can be Remove the comma
apply
great
fit for Add an article
a great
this
role.
Because I am a
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an
eduactor
by profession with experience of teaching Correct your spelling
educator
Punjabi
language for Change the article
the Punjabi
last
2 years in India which is Correct article usage
the last
also
my mother-tongue
. Correct your spelling
mother tongue
Actually
I feel proud to speak my language Add a comma
Actually,
hence
I have not left tutoring this
language even though most people here speak english
. Change the capitalization
English
Also
, I have certificate
of award for teaching more than 5000 children. Add an article
a certificate
the certificate
Although
my main purpose is to serve other
with my knowledge as much as I can.
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others
Moreover
, I also
teach statics and it's
Correct your spelling
its
anaylsis
from basic to advanced Correct your spelling
analysis
level
and hold Fix the agreement mistake
levels
degree
in Correct article usage
a degree
this
. If there is a need or interest, I can definitely help your children in this
field too.
Lastly
, this
job can help me gain some experience in working with pupils from different country
other than India. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Thus
, it is going to be new
learning place for me.
I will be looking to get Add an article
a new
reply
from you.
Regards
SimranAdd an article
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coherence cohesion
Consider clarifying the structure of your letter by using more distinct paragraphs for each point requested in the task. This could enhance the clarity and reading flow.
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It would be helpful to provide more specific examples or anecdotes of your experience to strengthen your application.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the use of more varied linking words or phrases for better logical flow between ideas.
task achievement
Your letter includes all required content points, addressing your suitability, additional help, and reasons for wanting the job.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone, suitable for a job application.
coherence cohesion
The use of greeting and closing in the letter adds a nice touch of formality.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite