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The charts below give information about children under 18 learning musical instruments in one region of the UK in 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about children under 18 learning musical instruments in one region of the UK in 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate vividly the percentage of
children
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 under 18 learning musical
instruments
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 in one particular area in the UK between 1996 and 2016,
while
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 the bar chart displays their choice of musical
instruments
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. As a whole, it is evident that the number of
children
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 studying musical
instruments
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 increased drastically over the given period.
Besides
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, piano and keyboard seemed to be a priority selection of British
children
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 in both measured years. Focusing
initially
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 on the first two pie charts, in 1996, 44% of
children
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 learned how to play musical
instruments
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,
while
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 the remaining 56% did not.
However
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, after only 10 years,
this
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 number witnessed a significant increase, accounting for more than three-quarters of all
children
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 in the UK. Turning attention to the bar chart,
it is clear that
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 piano was the top choice of
children
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 in 1996, with 30%, but it slightly reduced to 28% in 2006.
This
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 similar
downwards
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 trend can be easily seen in acoustic guitar
,
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 and violin.
By contrast
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, keyboard and electric guitar had
a
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significant growth in the same period, with 23% to 30% in the keyboard, and 12% to 16% in electric guitar.
Additionally
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, the ratio of
children
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 playing more than one instrument remained unchanged at 12% in both years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, instruments with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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