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The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart provides information about the
number
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 of five different means of
transport
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 registered in
Europe
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 throughout the years 1996 to 2006.
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, in both periods, the
number
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 of registered private cars was significantly higher than other modes of
transport
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, proving that
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 is the most popular type of vehicle over
the
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time.
According to
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 the chart, the
number
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 of private cars used by people in
Europe
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 was 19
million
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 in 1996,
this
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number
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 changed
about
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 26,32% ten years later, which increased considerably to 24
million
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.
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, the use of other means of
transport
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also
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 witnessed a significant growth from 1,5
million
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 in 1996 to 2
million
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 in 2006, which changed 58,33%.
Conversely
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, the figure for motorcycles registered in
Europe
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 witnessed a decline of about 40% from 1
million
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 in 1996 to 0,6
million
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 in 2006.
In addition
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, the figure for lorries used by people in
Europe
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 decreased slightly from 0,5
million
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 in 1996 to 0,4
million
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 in 2006, which changed -20,00%.
Meanwhile
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 the
number
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 of some means of
transport
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such
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 as buses, coaches, and taxis registered in
this
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 region remained unchanged at 0,1
million
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 from 1996 to 2006.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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