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The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart provides information about the
number
 of five different means of
transport
 registered in
Europe
 throughout the years 1996 to 2006.
Overall
, in both periods, the
number
 of registered private cars was significantly higher than other modes of
transport
, proving that
this
 is the most popular type of vehicle over
the
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time.
According to
 the chart, the
number
 of private cars used by people in
Europe
 was 19
million
 in 1996,
this
number
 changed
about
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 26,32% ten years later, which increased considerably to 24
million
.
Additionally
, the use of other means of
transport
also
 witnessed a significant growth from 1,5
million
 in 1996 to 2
million
 in 2006, which changed 58,33%.
Conversely
, the figure for motorcycles registered in
Europe
 witnessed a decline of about 40% from 1
million
 in 1996 to 0,6
million
 in 2006.
In addition
, the figure for lorries used by people in
Europe
 decreased slightly from 0,5
million
 in 1996 to 0,4
million
 in 2006, which changed -20,00%.
Meanwhile
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 the
number
 of some means of
transport
such
 as buses, coaches, and taxis registered in
this
 region remained unchanged at 0,1
million
 from 1996 to 2006.
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