The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006.
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The bar chart compared the five different
age
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groups
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of
people
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who accessed the
internet
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on a daily basis in the
UK
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between 2003 and 2006.
It is clear that
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age
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group
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in the
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accounted for the highest points of the whole graph over the four-year period.
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, aged 25-44 and 55-64 saw the largest rises in
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users
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over the same period. In 2003, the percentage of
people
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from 16-24
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groups
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was exactly 80%, compared to precisely 50% of
people
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aged 25-44. The figures for the youngest
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and those aged 25-44 saw only a small increase of a full 10%. In 2006,
people
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accessing the
internet
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aged 16-24 were by far the highest in terms of
users
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in the
UK
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, and the second one was the older
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group
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,
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group
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. The proportion of
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users
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gaining access from three other
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groups
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,45-54, 55-64, 65 and oversaw a relatively small rise in
users
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between 2003 and 2004 in the
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. In 2005, these
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groups
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used exactly 50%, 40%, and approximately 15% respectively. In 2006, the figure for those aged 45-54 reached nearly 55%,
while
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55-to
64-years-old
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64-year-old
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groups
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users
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figures increased dramatically and the percentage of the oldest
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group
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fluctuated slightly,
65-years-old
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65 years old
and over.
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