THE MAPS BELOW SHOW THE VILAGE OF sTOKEFORD IN 1930 ANDIN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTINGG AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT

THE MAPS BELOW SHOW THE VILAGE OF sTOKEFORD IN 1930 ANDIN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTINGG AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT
The provided map indicates the different changes
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Stokeford village over
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eighty-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the whole area witnessed a lot of various urbanization and
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development
over the period. In 1930, there used to be a massive farmland with some cows, which was removed and replaced by
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area in the southwest and northeast of the region in 2010. Another notable change is the transformation of the two shops into houses from 1930 to 2010.
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, there used to be a garden with some trees next to a large house in 1930, which was demolished and replaced by houses, and
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a new retirement home was erected beside it in the middle of
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in 2010. It is interesting to note that there was a long river from the north to the south with a bridge in the north, which remained unchanged between 1930 and 2010.
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, another striking development is the construction of the retirement home next to the primary school beside the main road from 1930 to 2010.
Moreover
, there was a post office which levelled off over the period.
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