The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph illustrates the share of regular physical activity by different
age
groups of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
in Australia in 2010.
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Overall
, both Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
across different Use synonyms
age
groups fluctuated throughout the given period. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, except for the 15 to 24 Linking Words
age
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group
, the percentage of Use synonyms
women
was always higher than Use synonyms
men
.
The 15 to 24 Use synonyms
age
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group
was the only Use synonyms
group
that male exceeded female, with 52.8% and 47.7%, respectively. In the 25 to 34 Use synonyms
age
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group
, Use synonyms
while
male's number dropped to 42.2%, Linking Words
female
increased Fix the agreement mistake
females
its
shares to almost 50%. The trend continued in the 35 to 44 Correct pronoun usage
their
age
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group
, with male shares decreasing slightly to under 40% Use synonyms
whereas
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female
grew to 52.5%.
In the next Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
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groups
category, the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
group
men
and Use synonyms
women
in the 45 to 54 Use synonyms
age
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group
increased, Use synonyms
with
45.1% and 53%, respectively. Change preposition
to
However
, Linking Words
while
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men
in the next Use synonyms
age
category grew to 45.1%, Use synonyms
women
slightly decreased to 53%. Use synonyms
This
continued to the 65 and over Linking Words
age
category, with Use synonyms
men
's number increased to 46.7% and Use synonyms
women
's number dropped to 47.1%.Use synonyms
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