Task 1 The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1

The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below shows the numbers of people for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne,Australia for the
last
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20
years
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Firstly
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, film club is the most popular activation between 2000 and 2020. But during these
years
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, the activity that experienced the most growth
is
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was
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table tennis. It
increase
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increases
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growth in 2010 and 2020. The martial art has changed over the course of 15
years
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, remaining consistently stable from 2015-2020.Musical
performans
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performers
musical performance entered the list in 2005 and increased in 15
years
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.The only activity that experienced a decrease in
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list was amateur dramatics. In the period of 2000-2005, the number of participants was 25, but by 2020,
this
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number plummeted and fell to 3. In general, film club, material arts, and musical performance have increased in the list, but there has been no decrease
as a result
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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