Hello sir/madam,
I hope you doing well. I wanted to reach out to you about an advertisement which I have seen in an Australian magazine about living with a family for six months and taking care of
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infant. My name is Ali and I recently completed my nanny course and qualified to take care of children.
I am a very active and hardworking candidate and work
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without any fatigue. In 2022, I did a child aftercare job and received a positive response. I have good
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skills and am very updated with new technology.
In my spare time, I will explore the nature and environment. I hope you find the ability in me to take care of your child. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you,
Ali