The charts below show the percentage ofwater used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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reasons
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Overall
, Agriculture
is the most noticable
used in four areas which are South Correct your spelling
noticeable
America
, Africa,Central Asia
,South
East Correct word choice
and South
Asia
while
the highest usage of North America
and Europe is industry.
In North America
almost half amount
of water has been used by industrial Correct article usage
the amount
follow
by gardening at 39 per Wrong verb form
followed
cent
which is 26 per cent
more than domestic. Moreover
, Europe use
water for Change the verb form
uses
industrial larger
than half of Correct word choice
more
the
usage, with Change the word
its
agriculture
at 32 per cent
also
domestic has been
used nearly 10 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
which is lower than a quarter.
In contrast
,South America
use agricultural
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agriculture
at
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apply
the
first around Correct article usage
apply
two-third
(71per Correct your spelling
two-thirds
cent
), domestic
is in Correct word choice
and domestic
the
second Correct article usage
apply
for
nearly 20 Change preposition
at
percent
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per cent
together with
industrial at the least.Furthermore
Africa Add a comma
Furthermore,
spend
the usage Change the verb form
spends
in
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on
agriculture
at 84 per cent
, then
domestic also
industrial at 9 and 7 per cent
respectively.In
addition
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addition,
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has similar numbers with Africa, by got
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getting
different
between industrial and domestic at the exactly same rate, Replace the word
difference
as well as
agricultural at 88 per cent
. Lastly
South East Add a comma
Lastly,
Asia
use
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agricultural
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agriculture
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