The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart elaborates
the
data of the variation that took place in three different areas of misconduct in Panama City between 2010 to 2019.
Change preposition
on the
Overall
, the rate of burglarry
was at Correct your spelling
burglary
the
peak in 2011 with the Change the word
its
number
of cases
around 3700. While
,
car theft and robbery Remove the comma
apply
cases
were be
in a range nearly at 2500 and 700 respectively.
Change the verb form
were
However
, burglary incidents after 2011 showed a sudden dramatic fall from 2012 to 2015 afterwards it continues with number
of Change the article
a number
the number
cases
approximately
1000 till 2019. Change preposition
of approximately
While
, car theft cases
was begins
from 2700Change the verb form
began
Correct word choice
apply
although
, from the mid
of 2012 to 2016 , the Correct your spelling
middle
number
of cases
dropped to around 2000 , but at the
end
of this
2019 cases
came back at the beginning from where it starts
to happen. Wrong verb form
started
On the other hand
, robbery cases
were remains
at the Wrong verb form
remain
least
Correct word choice
lowest
amongs
all, from the Correct your spelling
among
amongst
inaugurate
nearby 700. Afterwards, the pattern was like Wrong verb form
inaugurated
zigzag
till the Correct article usage
a zigzag
end
. In
addition
the maximum and minimum Add a comma
addition,
cases
over the period of time were around 900 in 2012 and 500 in 2015. At
the Change the preposition
In
end
, this
was
Verb problem
apply
also
end
up with the Wrong verb form
ended
number
of occurrence
as Change to a plural noun
occurrences
same
as the start.Correct article usage
the same
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