The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts give information about how

energy

is used by the Australian household, followed by the

greenhouse

gas

emissions

appeared

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that appeared

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from the

energy

used. Heating is the highest

energy

used and the lowest is cooling, but

as a

result

of a

greenhouse

gas

showing that the highest

result

is

water

heating and the lowest

remain

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remains

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still the cooling. The biggest

energy

use by Australian

household

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households

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are heating and

water

heating with a number of 42% and 30%, unlike the

result

of

this

energy

use the heating only produces about 15%

while

the

water

heating doesn't show any

different

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difference

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.

Also

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we can see that Australian

household

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households

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doesn't

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don't

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really

used

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use

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cooling and lighting too much, and it was proven by the

result

of the

greenhouse

gas

emissions

which only

shows

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3% and 8%. Compared with

energy

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the energy

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used, the

greenhouse

gas

emissions

showing that displaying that

the

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apply

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most

energy

that

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apply

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produced

lot

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a lot

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of

greenhouse

gas

emissions

are

water

heating and other appliances (32% and 28%),

while

the

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heating is more likely to

had

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have

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a small impact

for

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the

greenhouse

gas

emissions

nearly 1/3 of the

energy

we used from heating.