The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts give information about how

energy

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is used by the Australian household, followed by the

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gas

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emissions

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appeared

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from the

energy

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used. Heating is the highest

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used and the lowest is cooling, but

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result

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of a

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gas

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showing that the highest

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is

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heating and the lowest

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still the cooling. The biggest

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use by Australian

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households

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are heating and

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heating with a number of 42% and 30%, unlike the

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of

this

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energy

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use the heating only produces about 15%

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the

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heating doesn't show any

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.

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we can see that Australian

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doesn't

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don't

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really

used

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cooling and lighting too much, and it was proven by the

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of the

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gas

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which only

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3% and 8%. Compared with

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energy

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the energy

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used, the

greenhouse

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gas

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emissions

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showing that displaying that

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apply

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most

energy

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that

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apply

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produced

lot

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a lot

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of

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are

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heating and other appliances (32% and 28%),

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the

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heating is more likely to

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a small impact

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the

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gas

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emissions

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nearly 1/3 of the

energy

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we used from heating.