The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart compares data about how many people lived( per million), birthed, and died in thousand in England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.
Overall
, it was important that the number of both communities and births went up over the period of 300 years; Linking Words
additionally
, the trends of Linking Words
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were roughly the same.
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the graph, in the beginning, the figure for population hit nearly 2 ;Linking Words
then
it increased to 10 in 1750; Linking Words
however
, it dipped to almost 4 in 1800; Linking Words
thereafter
, it leapt overwhelmingly to 50 in 2000.
The diagram demonstrates that Linking Words
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fashions approximately were the same as each other. At the start, Use synonyms
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reached 30 and Use synonyms
death
reported 26 after that, both of them jumped moderately to 40 for Use synonyms
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and just over 36 for Use synonyms
death
in 1750; Use synonyms
then
both of them stabilized until 1800; Linking Words
thereafter
, they 8 declined in 1850; Linking Words
then
Later their number was constant until 1900. Later they reduced somewhat to 22 for Linking Words
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and 20 for Use synonyms
death
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
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climbed to just under 32; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, Linking Words
death
stabilised.Use synonyms
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