Task 1 . The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the result of the analysis of people’s drinking routine and purchasing habits of espresso and tea in different Australian cities
Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart.
Overall
, in all five countries, the highest proportion
of people went to cafes to drink coffee
and tea in the last
four
weeks
. The percentage
of residents
who bought instant coffee
came to the second highest proportion
, while
the lowest proportion
of residents
who only bought fresh coffee
in the last
four
weeks
.
The percentage
of residents
who went to a coffee
shop to drink espresso or tea in the last
four
weeks
in Sydney
, Melbourne
and Hobart was the highest number compared with all others nearly 61%,64% and 63% respectively in the last
month, whilst residents
in Brisbane
and Adelaide
had the lowest percentage
with 55% and 49%. The proportion
of citizens consuming instant coffee
was the largest in Hobart, Adelaide
and Brisbane
nearly 54%,50% and 53% respectively in the last
30 days. Meanwhile, the consumption of instant coffee
in Melbourne
and Sydney
had the smallest percentage
with only 47% and 45% in the last
four
weeks
.
However
, residents
who consumed fresh coffee
in the last
month were the highest number in Sydney
and Melbourne
nearly 44 per cent
and 43 per cent
respectively, while
Harbor City took the second highest number of bought fresh coffee
nearly 37 per cent
. People from Brisbane
and Adelaide
had relatively the same percentage
of buying fresh coffee
in the last
month at 34 per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, proportion, coffee, four, weeks, percentage, residents, cent with synonyms.
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