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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams demonstrate the changes in sizes and shapes between prehistoric and modern horses from 40
million
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years
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 ago to today.
In addition
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, these photographs
also
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 describe the evolutionary stages of their
feet
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 during
this
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 given period. In general, throughout history, the
size
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 of horses has increased gradually, and the structure of their
feet
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 has become simpler to adapt to new environmental habitats.
According to
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 the data, the original
horse
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, Eohippus, existed 40
million
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years
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 ago. These creatures were small, and their tails were short at the time, with four slender toes on each foot. Over the following 10
million
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years
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, the descendants of Eohippus, called Mesohippus, emerged, owning a bigger
size
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 and longer tails than their ancestors. Notably, Mesohippus’
feet
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 had only three digits on each foot. Approximately 15
million
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years
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 ago, the presence of Merychippus was recorded. These wild animals were taller, and their mane was thicker than the two former species.
Moreover
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,
although
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 the structure of the
feet
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 was similar to that of the Mesohippus, the
size
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 was bigger, specifically the middle toe.
Finally
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, the modern
horse
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, known as the
last
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 transformation, had the biggest
size
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 among others. With a sturdy single hoof and strong structure of bone, they contributed to an erect posture for
this
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 kind of
horse
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.
Additionally
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, because of the change in DNA, it was found that there was more hair on the mane and tail of the modern
horse
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, years, feet, size, horse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolution
  • prehistoric
  • size progression
  • hoof development
  • toes transformation
  • limb elongation
  • species adaptation
  • significant change
  • comparative size
  • distinct differences
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