The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the annual salary of three
languages-related
to jobs, given in US dollars currency in five countries .
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languages related
Overall
, interpreter
job has the highest annual Correct article usage
the interpreter
income
by far, Language
teacher
annual incomes vary from one country to another and ultimately, translator jobs Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
has
relatively the same Change the verb form
have
income
value in all mentioned countries except in Dubai and Mexico.
Firstly
, Mexico doesn’t provide higher than almost $200,000 per year for each of languages-related jobs
in comparison to Paris and Dubai .
In Dubai, language
teacher and interpreter
salaries are relatively the same with nearly $600,000 per year and translators gain almost $500 000 annually .
While
in Paris translator
gain nearly a similar Fix the agreement mistake
translators
income
as interpreter
with approximately $650,000 per year meanwhile Fix the agreement mistake
interpreters
language
teachers don’t get more than $450,000 .
In Toronto and Munich
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Munich,
interpreter
has the highest languages-related job Fix the agreement mistake
interpreters
income
with almost $800,000
While
translators in both Toronto and Munich and language
teachers in Toronto gain almost the same income
of almost $650,000 annually, language
teachers in Munich income
declines slightly to almost $600,000.Submitted by sandraabdulkarim1 on
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