The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the annual salary of three
languages-related
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languages related
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to jobs, given in US dollars currency in five countries .
Overall
,
interpreter
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the interpreter
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job has the highest annual
income
by far,
Language
teacher
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teachers
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annual incomes vary from one country to another and ultimately, translator jobs
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relatively the same
income
value in all mentioned countries except in Dubai and Mexico.
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, Mexico doesn’t provide higher than almost $200,000 per year for each of languages-related jobs in comparison to Paris and Dubai . In Dubai,
language
teacher and
interpreter
salaries are relatively the same with nearly $600,000 per year and translators gain almost $500 000 annually .
While
in Paris
translator
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translators
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gain nearly a similar
income
as
interpreter
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interpreters
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with approximately $650,000 per year meanwhile
language
teachers don’t get more than $450,000 . In Toronto and
Munich
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Munich,
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interpreter
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interpreters
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has the highest languages-related job
income
with almost $800,000
While
translators in both Toronto and Munich and
language
teachers in Toronto gain almost the same
income
of almost $650,000 annually,
language
teachers in Munich
income
declines slightly to almost $600,000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words interpreter, income, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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