The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002.It includes those with a degree,those with a higher degree(postgraduate)and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002.It includes those with a degree,those with a higher degree(postgraduate)and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates the weekly earnings of full-time graduate employees of different generations in 2002 including persons with a
degree
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and higher
degree
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.
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, we can observe that employees aged from 36 to 46, who have different types of education, rather than a first
degree
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or higher qualification, had lower earnings than people from different age groups with the same
degree
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.
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, individuals with higher education from 41 until 55 years old have slightly less money than people from different generations.
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, employees with higher degrees aged from 54 up to 60 have a higher earning potential than their younger colleagues.
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, earning potential for people with first a
degree
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, as it is shown in the graph, increased steadily for the age group from 46 to 56 years.
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, higher
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degree
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degrees
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and first
qualification
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qualifications
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show a positive trend,
while
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other education demonstrates a downward trend for
age
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the age
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group older than 36.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degree with synonyms.
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