The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002.It includes those with a degree,those with a higher degree(postgraduate)and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the weekly earnings of full-time graduate employees of different generations in 2002 including persons with a
degree
and higher degree
.
Firstly
, we can observe that employees aged from 36 to 46, who have different types of education, rather than a first degree
or higher qualification, had lower earnings than people from different age groups with the same degree
. Also
, individuals with higher education from 41 until 55 years old have slightly less money than people from different generations.
Secondly
, employees with higher degrees aged from 54 up to 60 have a higher earning potential than their younger colleagues. Additionally
, earning potential for people with first a degree
, as it is shown in the graph, increased steadily for the age group from 46 to 56 years.
Overall
, higher degree
and first Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
qualification
show a positive trend, Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
while
other education demonstrates a downward trend for age
group older than 36.Correct article usage
the age
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