The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphic illustrates the gym
membership
of male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
between 1980 and 2010, the horizontal axis shows the Fix the agreement mistake
females
years
of the study and the vertical axis presents the quantity of membership
for each genre.
The graphic shows important facts, such
as women's subscriptions gradually increased over the years
after different variations, even if those variations take place every five years
. However
, men's subscriptions do not have a trend, this
one presents a fluctuation that takes place every ten years
.
In addition
, it is known that the lowest point of membership
for women was in 1980 and the highest point was in 2005, in contrast
, the highest point for men was in 2005, but after
this
year, the number of subscriptions considerably fell down until the lowest mark of this
genre, 2010.
In conclusion, women's membership
gradually rose over the years
and men's membership
fell down after the year 2005, this
trend could be affected by different social and economic aspects such
as social media and globalization.Submitted by mariajoser3 on
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