The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphic illustrates the gym
membership
of males and females between 1980 and 2010.
Over the years
, We can conclude that women
's membership
has gradually risen, however
, men
's membership
has a significant fluctuation
. It is affected by different reasons such
as social trends, and the behaviour of society.
First,
the lowest point for women
was in 1980, the beginning of the period, in contrast
, men
had this
point in 2010, the end of the same period.
Second,
the fluctuation
of men
is every ten years
, which means that this
behaviour is presented in 1985, 1995 and 2005.
Finally
, the fluctuation
of women
is every five years
, but it is affected by different aspects of society and the changes presented in those years
.
In brief, Women
's membership
has an increasing trend and the men
have a strong fluctuation
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