The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of internationa students graduating fromm universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of internationa students graduating fromm universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The provided graph illustrates the proportion change in the number of international university leavers across Canadian provinces throughout a 5-period between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
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, it is evident that most provinces in Canada experienced an upward trend,
while
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only Alberta
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underwent a downward pattern in the period of time.
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with, the percentage of international students finishing their studies from New Brunswick showed the greatest proportion in 2001 and 2006 at approximately 7 per
cent
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and less than 12 per
cent
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, respectively.
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, there was a significant increase
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the percentage from British Columbia
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at above 4 per
cent
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in 2001 to more than one in ten in 2006.
Subsequently
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, there was a similar pattern between Manitoba
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and Newfoundland & Labrador
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at
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less than 4
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in 2001 to around 5
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in 2006.
On the other hand
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, the number of individuals leaving higher educational institutions in the
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of Alberta fell between 2001 and 2006. Starting at more than 4 per
cent
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in 2001 to lower than 6 per
cent
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.
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