The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The given bar chart, which depicts in great detail, illustrates the comparison between the top ten
countries
such
as China, the United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep for the amount
of manufacture and utilization electricity
in 2014. The unit is based on billion
kWh
.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that in all countries
the amount
of production
electricity
was more than the amount
of consumption electricity
, whereas
in Germany the amount
of expenditure electricity
was more than the amount
of production
electricity
.
To commence with, there were five countries
with production
and consumption of electricity
more
than 650 Change preposition
of more
billion
kWh
. China, the United States, Russia, Japan and India with producing and using electricity
(5,398-5,322), (4,099-3,866), (1,057-1,038), (936.2-859.7) and (871-698.8) billion
kWh
were one to five ranks respectively.
On the flip side, there were five countries
with production
and consumption electricity
less than 650 billion
kWh
than Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep with producing and utilizing electricity
(618.9-499.9), (561.2-462.9), (530.7-455.8), (526.6-582.5) and (485.1-449.5) billion
kWh
were six to ten ranks respectively.Submitted by amirghhhhhh1999 on
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