The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The given bar chart, which depicts in great detail, illustrates the comparison between the top ten
countries
such
as China, the United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep for the
amount
of manufacture and utilization
electricity
in 2014. The unit is based on
billion
kWh
.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that in all
countries
the
amount
of
production
electricity
was more than the
amount
of consumption
electricity
,
whereas
in Germany the
amount
of expenditure
electricity
was more than the
amount
of
production
electricity
. To commence with, there were five
countries
with
production
and consumption of
electricity
more
Change preposition
of more
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than 650
billion
kWh
. China, the United States, Russia, Japan and India with producing and using
electricity
(5,398-5,322), (4,099-3,866), (1,057-1,038), (936.2-859.7) and (871-698.8)
billion
kWh
were one to five ranks respectively. On the flip side, there were five
countries
with
production
and consumption
electricity
less than 650
billion
kWh
than Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep with producing and utilizing
electricity
(618.9-499.9), (561.2-462.9), (530.7-455.8), (526.6-582.5) and (485.1-449.5)
billion
kWh
were six to ten ranks respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, amount, electricity, billion, kwh, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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