The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
people
using the Internet over a period running from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
, the young age
group
from 15-24 was the highest percentage compared with the other age
groups. In addition
, there was an increase in the proportion of people
of all age
brackets during the entire period.
In 2003, securing the top position was the 16-24- year-s
old participants, at 80%. Correct your spelling
years
This
was followed by people
aged 45-54 and 25-44, with respectively
figures being 60% and 50%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the Change the adverb
respective
group
55-64 was about 30%. In particular
, there was almost no one aged 65+ using the internet in 2003.
Thereafter
, the participation rate in people
of the group
16-24 increased dramatically and then
reached a peak of 100% in the next 2 years, before declining by 10% in 2006. Besides
, the age
group
25-44 and 45-54 had a similar trend, in which the figure o for them witnessed a considerable rise, then
came to 80% at the end
of period
. Add an article
the period
Likewise
, a sharp growth was observed in the
internet users aged 55-64 and 65+, at 50% and 30% Correct article usage
apply
in
turn in 2006.Change preposition
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