The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
people
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using the Internet over a period running from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
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, the young
age
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group
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from 15-24 was the highest percentage compared with the other
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groups.
In addition
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, there was an increase in the proportion of
people
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of all
age
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brackets during the entire period. In 2003, securing the top position was the 16-24-
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old participants, at 80%.
This
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was followed by
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aged 45-54 and 25-44, with
respectively
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figures being 60% and 50%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the
group
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55-64 was about 30%.
In particular
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, there was almost no one aged 65+ using the internet in 2003.
Thereafter
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, the participation rate in
people
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of the
group
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16-24 increased dramatically and
then
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reached a peak of 100% in the next 2 years, before declining by 10% in 2006.
Besides
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, the
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group
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25-44 and 45-54 had a similar trend, in which the figure o for them witnessed a considerable rise,
then
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came to 80%
at the end
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of
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.
Likewise
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, a sharp growth was observed in
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internet users aged 55-64 and 65+, at 50% and 30%
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turn in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • daily internet use
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • upward/downward trend
  • year-wise
  • distribution
  • fluctuation
  • highest/lowest
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • targeted marketing
  • internet usage patterns
  • technological familiarity
  • lifestyle
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