The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key information about the annual
income
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of languages-related jobs in Mexico, Dubai, Paris, Munich and Toronto. The units are measured in
dollars
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the interpreter is always similar to or bigger than other jobs.
In addition
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, in Paris interpreters and
translators
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had the same rate
whereas
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in Toronto
translators
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and
language
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teachers a similar.
According to
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what is shown, Mexico had nearly similar
income
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, in Dubai the interpreter and
language
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teacher had 60000
dollars
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in
income
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and the smallest
income
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was a translator and in Paris the biggest
income
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was for the interpreter and translator nearly 65000
dollars
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and for the
language
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teacher it was less than50000
dollars
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. In terms of
Munich
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Munich,
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there were different rates of
income
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for interpreters it was 75000 nearly,
translators
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were less than 70000 and
language
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teachers had the smallest
income
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in Munich 60000
dollars
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.
Last
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City Toronto have the biggest
income
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of all cities in interpreters 80000
dollars
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and the same rate for
language
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teachers and
translators
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, dollars, translators, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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