Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary Public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is well known that people pay
taxes
for the country
necessities. Some individuals Change noun form
country's
belive
that authorities should receive much higher fees from citizen's pockets for better public services Correct your spelling
believe
such
as transportation and education. However
, the remaining are convinced that heavy taxes
are a misery . Moreover
, it is important to have a balance between high fees and the population
needs.
Undoubtedly, the monthly tariffs, taken by Change noun form
population's
government
, are essential requirements for a Add an article
the government
country
. Additionally
, the authorities are responsible for people’s welfare, so they have to do everything possible to assure
a decent lifestyle. Verb problem
ensure
For instance
, the country
appearance has to be repaid in a Change noun form
country's
while
, so, things such
as roads, buildings, sanitary, and others, should be paid from people’s money , because they live there.
In contrast
, excessive taxes
is
one of the worst Correct subject-verb agreement
are
problem
a society can have. Change to a plural noun
problems
Due to
its unsureness, sometimes most individuals feel like slaves for
the government. They pay these fees, and because of a bad Change preposition
to
leading
, the resources Replace the word
lead
did
not apply Wrong verb form
do
into
the maintenance of the city, but Change preposition
to
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
goes
to someone else’s wallet. Correct subject-verb agreement
go
For example
in my country
has
been a lot of corruption and much money Correct pronoun usage
there has
was
stolen. Wrong verb form
has been
Consequently
the city infrastructure has not been developed for many years.
In conclusion, paying high Add a comma
Consequently,
taxes
does not have only desandvantages
, but Correct your spelling
disadvantages
also
advantages. Certainly, we have to pay taxes
for the country
development. Change noun form
country's
Although
, we have to be sure of how our money is spent. To my way of thinking, bills are crucial when it comes about
a nation's economy. It is Change preposition
to
clearly
that the citizens should contribute Change the word
clear
for
their own Change preposition
to
home
.Fix the agreement mistake
homes
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