The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 2980 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 2980 and 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the number of
electricity
production
by fuel
resources
in
Australia
and
France
from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the total
production
in both
Australia
and
France
witnessed a rapid increase during the period shown. Remarkably, coal material was the most popular in
Australia
while
nuclear power was the most popular in
France
that was not produced in
Australia
. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the total
electricity
production
in
Australia
was 100
units
in 1980
however
this
figure
grew significantly to 170
units
in 2000. particularly, in 1980, there were 50
units
of
electricity
made from coal materials and 50 total
units
of
electricity
made from
oil
, natural
gas
, and
hydropower
material
however
in 2000, the
figure
for
electricity
produced from coal materials went up to 170
units
, and that
figure
for all of
electricity
produced from
oil
, natural
gas
, and
hydropower
material declined to 40
units
.
On the other hand
, the total
electricity
production
in
France
was 90
units
in 1980 but
this
figure
soared significantly to 180
units
in 2000. To be exact , in 1980, there were only 15
units
of
electricity
made from nuclear power and 75
units
of
electricity
made from all coal,
oil
, natural
gas
, and
hydropower
resources
whereas
in 2000, the figures for
electricity
produced by nuclear power
resources
picked at 126
units
.
By contrast
, the total
figure
for all coal,
oil
, natural
gas
, and
hydropower
resources
decreased to 54
units
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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