The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 2980 and 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the number of
electricity
production
by fuel resources
in Australia
and France
from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the total production
in both Australia
and France
witnessed a rapid increase during the period shown. Remarkably, coal material was the most popular in Australia
while
nuclear power was the most popular in France
that was not produced in Australia
.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the total electricity
production
in Australia
was 100 units
in 1980 however
this
figure
grew significantly to 170 units
in 2000. particularly, in 1980, there were 50 units
of electricity
made from coal materials and 50 total units
of electricity
made from oil
, natural gas
, and hydropower
material however
in 2000, the figure
for electricity
produced from coal materials went up to 170 units
, and that figure
for all of electricity
produced from oil
, natural gas
, and hydropower
material declined to 40 units
.
On the other hand
, the total electricity
production
in France
was 90 units
in 1980 but this
figure
soared significantly to 180 units
in 2000. To be exact , in 1980, there were only 15 units
of electricity
made from nuclear power and 75 units
of electricity
made from all coal, oil
, natural gas
, and hydropower
resources
whereas
in 2000, the figures for electricity
produced by nuclear power resources
picked at 126 units
. By contrast
, the total figure
for all coal, oil
, natural gas
, and hydropower
resources
decreased to 54 units
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